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12 January 2010 @ 08:17 pm
First fic request - from Justin's Baby verse  
So here is a snippet for charlie_jae, the first person to request something tonight.

And what did Ms. Charlie want? Something from the Justin's Baby verse, of course! LOL!

So here's a little ditty about some missionaries who come across the apartment building. If you've been reading the fic, you know which one I'm talking about. :)

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Kurt was on a mission.

What's-his-name was on one too.

Oh yeah, John.

John Wadsworth.

The kid went on and on about the Book, his Faith, and God, yadda yadda yadda.

He was pretty sick of it by now. This was the third kid they sent him. John had gone on and on about how excited he was to 'spread the Word of the Lord!'

Hallelujah! Amen! Pass the fucking Tylenol.

It's not that Kurt doesn't believe. Because he believes.

Oh he believes because when he passes that building, the beautiful old apartment building on that quiet street, ha can feel It.

It's cold. It's dark.

It's ancient.

An ancient Evil that draws all the warmth in the area surrounding you, making you wonder if it could ever be replaced again.

Kurt called this walk through the neighborhood his little test he runs on every new missionary they send him. He walks them past that building and sees what happens.

And as they walked by the building today, John seeming to never shut up once during the whole time, he looked up at the window at the very top.

And there It was. The curtain had been drawn before, but it was if He knew Kurt would be there today. He could see Him looking down at him, his arms crossed over his chest, a smirk gracing his face.

The Book had been right because He was the most beautiful Angel.

Even a Fallen One.

He watched as John Wadsworth, the apple of the the Parish he had come from in Home, Pennsylvania, the best student the good Reverend Parker had sworn by, walked by the building and stopped.

Maybe John would be different...

"Are you coming or what? What's the matter with you?" John asked perplexed.

No, nothing was different.

Because John Wadsworth was just like all the other missionaries that had come before him. Big Talk but no real Faith.

But Kurt had it.

Because this place proved it.

Shivering as he looked up at the window one more time, the curtain covering the glass panes once again, Kurt continued to walk on, listening to the inane prattle coming from John's mouth, wondering how long it would take him to get warm this time.

The End

Hope this works for you! :)

Current Mood: happyhappy
charlie_jae on January 13th, 2010 04:58 am (UTC)
That was awesome... Totally shouldn't have read it while attempting to
sleep but my phone went Ding!!! N I saw email N it brought me here.
To my Snippett!!!! ::hugssnippet::

Ohhhh tWas like I was watching Kurt n his little wannabe John.
I should remember yes I should but my sleep addled brain won't let me.
Makes me wonder wat would happen the day he finds a 'believer'.

Oh bad CJ must go to bed::twitches::

Maria: Justin condomslave_o_spike on January 13th, 2010 04:53 pm (UTC)
Uh oh! Did I make it hard for you to go to sleep with the lights out? LOL!

Glad you liked since this is what you requested. You're welcome! :)
1islandinthesea: SHARK1islandinthesea on January 13th, 2010 07:27 am (UTC)
OMG,thank you so much! Very nice snippet, indeed. Could see that beautiful fallen angel in the window, yeah, and feel a Gothic-like atmosphere as the men walked by.
Also, am I completely insane, or was there a Chevy Chase's Christmas Vacation reference in there? lol
Maria: Justin's Babyslave_o_spike on January 13th, 2010 04:56 pm (UTC)
Actually this is the one charlie_rae requested. I have one for you that I'll post later today - a dialogue between Brian and Joe.

I do want that Gothic atmosphere when people are reading it so I'm glad it came across. Thank you. :)

And yes, I think I was channeling Chevy there because my kids watched that movie during the holidays. That was when he was super upset about the Christmas bonus (AKA the jelly of the month club which cousin Eddie said that was the gift that kept on giving).
kika-k: Bri likes big butts and he cannot liekika_k on January 13th, 2010 09:15 am (UTC)
Uaaa! A little snippet from Justin's Baby verse! *grin*
Mhhhhh...maybe the next story could be either Justin’s Baby or QaF Cannibal CrackFic!
*a big smile for you*
Maria: cannibal Brian - Meat Procurerslave_o_spike on January 13th, 2010 04:56 pm (UTC)
I'm thinking a snippet from good ole Cannibal county USA. :) Thank you!
shadownycshadownyc on January 13th, 2010 12:23 pm (UTC)
Now I need more from this universe! :D
Maria: Justin's Baby - Brian's Image?slave_o_spike on January 13th, 2010 04:57 pm (UTC)
More snippets coming and I still have the chapter where they first have sex to come. Thanks shadow (even though this snippet is so unbeta'd and badly written. LOL!)
Dorian: brian taking pictdorian on January 13th, 2010 02:27 pm (UTC)
I love it.I can't wait to read these dark fics stories you've been writing because you really have a talent with darknscary things.Ah the image you put in my mind...my beautiful fallen angel ! *dreamy eyes* MORE.Aida
Maria: Brian Predatoryslave_o_spike on January 13th, 2010 04:58 pm (UTC)
I can see Brian smirking in the window and it's beautiful. *sniff*

And scary as all hell. LOL! Thanks Aida!
rosy5000: Brian Gorgeousrosy5000 on January 13th, 2010 04:06 pm (UTC)
What that description of Brian, who wouldn't want to follow him? lol
Maria: BJ Guh Showerslave_o_spike on January 13th, 2010 04:59 pm (UTC)
Yeah, I know, but Kurt believes in good, not evil and hot. LOL! Thanks Rosy!
Karenkhaywren on January 13th, 2010 05:17 pm (UTC)
Oh Maria - this made my day (tells you about my social life, eh?)!

Yay for Justin's Baby fic. And Yay for Maria writing. Regardless of the 'verse, it's good to see your words!

Maria: Justin gets caughtslave_o_spike on January 13th, 2010 11:01 pm (UTC)
LOL! Well, I don't care. I made your day and it makes MY day to know I play an important role in someone else's life. :)

And Thank you!
snow_white79snow_white79 on January 13th, 2010 10:16 pm (UTC)
Maria: Justin smilingslave_o_spike on January 13th, 2010 11:00 pm (UTC)
I'm awful, aren't I? LOL!
Lisa: N/S5 Brian sorta smilebrianswalk on January 14th, 2010 01:30 am (UTC)
He could see Him looking down at him, his arms crossed over his chest, a smirk gracing his face.

The Book had been right because He was the most beautiful Angel.

Even a Fallen One.

Oooh, creepy. Well done.

Um, an I supposed to remember who Kurt and John are?
Maria: Brian Predatoryslave_o_spike on January 14th, 2010 07:04 am (UTC)
Nope, Kurt and John are just OCs and for this snippet only. Never fear.

And yay! I meant for it to be creepy so hey! Thank you!!! :)
girloftheburbs: Galaxy Quest - Oh?girloftheburbs on January 16th, 2010 02:19 am (UTC)
Ooooh, very nice! Brian is quite a beautiful (fallen) angel, isn't he? ;)
Maria: BJ cuddleslave_o_spike on January 16th, 2010 10:42 pm (UTC)
*nods head*

Yes he is! Thanks!