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15 February 2010 @ 07:41 pm
Brian/Justin standalone - "Within These Here Walls"  
Okay, here's the short Brian/Justin horror story.

I sure hope I don't lose any friends over this...

Anywho, I need to take a moment to say, This is not an indication of where my Brian/Justin will be going. I am not trying to leave the fandom by doing this. It's just a plot bunny that grabbed hold and wouldn't let go.

I would like to take a moment to thank my beta, sevigny7 for an awesome and quick job. Thank you babe! Any snippet you want! You got it. :)

Title: Within These Here Walls
Pairing: Brian/Justin
Fandom: Queer as Folk
Rating: R?
Warnings: Major Character Death, psychosis.

Summary: Justin does marry Brian and they do move to BriTin. The eventual outcome of the slow degeneration of a person's mind.

Disclaimer: I don't own Cowlip, or the boys. And my flist will probably be a lot smaller after this.

It's not too late to turn back...Collapse )
Current Mood: anxiousanxious
Lisa: J/Justin/Sad Sunshinebrianswalk on February 16th, 2010 12:43 pm (UTC)
So, uh Maria, how's Joe been lately?

Such a cool idea, I love the thought of a haunted Britin! Do it again!
Maria: B/J cha cha chaslave_o_spike on February 20th, 2010 07:27 am (UTC)
Joe's been fine (I haven't killed him and buried the body, don't worry. LOL!)

Haunted Britin makes sense. I could do it again - only with a happy ending (I don't mean this particular story - I mean, a different plot altogether).

Thank you! *hugs you*
(no subject) - brianswalk on February 21st, 2010 02:24 am (UTC) (Expand)
Jackiejackieville on February 16th, 2010 01:01 pm (UTC)
It's amazing! Has me freaked out but amazing!!!!!

*squishes and loves*
Maria: Justin smilingslave_o_spike on February 20th, 2010 07:28 am (UTC)
Thank you Jackie! *squishes and loves*

Okay, I know you read my QaF sometimes, but I thought you didn't like character death. Whatever, I'm glad you came. :)
(no subject) - jackieville on February 20th, 2010 12:12 pm (UTC) (Expand)
tammykay715tammykay715 on February 16th, 2010 01:39 pm (UTC)
WOW! I'm stunned, I'm speechless...but somehow, I really loved reading this! It's so different.....
Maria: BJ - 314 is loveslave_o_spike on February 20th, 2010 07:29 am (UTC)
Yeah, different and me pretty much go hand in hand. :P

I love this kind of fb - I had people completely floored but still loving it! Thank you!!!
Doriantdorian on February 16th, 2010 03:56 pm (UTC)
*still giggling madly*I LOVE IT !!! When, oh when are you gonna write that original story,that book,just anything out of the little world of lj ?? Come on Maria, you are so talenetd ,seriously...I was glued to the screen,eyes wide (yes the person opposite me told me so) and so totally afarid of reading the end which I knew would be terrible.I loev this,love the rampant fear.GREAT WORK !! Aida
ps: about cannibals, someone told me you had the end finished...YOU DRIVE ME CRAZY !!!!
Maria: BJ cuddleslave_o_spike on February 20th, 2010 07:31 am (UTC)
LOL! Someone told you you had your eyes wide open and glued to the screen.

Best. FB. Ever!!!!

*hugs and twirls you* Thanks Aida. :)
Yvonne Reidyvonnereid on February 16th, 2010 04:53 pm (UTC)
This is defiently a newbe for me,very well written
Maria: B/J cha cha chaslave_o_spike on February 20th, 2010 07:32 am (UTC)
Why thank you. :) Not many of these out there.

But still, I'll make sure it's the only one.
Monahear_myself on February 16th, 2010 06:15 pm (UTC)
This was certainly different! I almost didn't read it because I almost always skip stories that involve character deaths but I'm glad I read this. Very good and original :)
Maria: money shotslave_o_spike on February 20th, 2010 07:33 am (UTC)
Wow! Cool! II hate putting the warning there because I know people who steer clear of any MCD, but you still read it.

Thank you. Glad it didn't disappoint.
Pam81: B/j together more 308pam81 on February 17th, 2010 11:26 am (UTC)
Even if this story broke my heart, I've found it beautiful...
So interesting and very well written.
It was good to read something different, thanks :)
Maria: B/J cha cha chaslave_o_spike on February 20th, 2010 07:34 am (UTC)
Like I said, I'm no stranger to different however, this one was quite different from anything even I write.

Thank you for the lovely fb. :)
CoraCcoraaajt on February 17th, 2010 08:00 pm (UTC)
girl! you really have a thing about those walls, huh?

*whisper* you can trust me, totally, i won't tell anyone else--do you talk to your wall when there's only you at home? what did they say to you?

Maria: Frodo doesn't live here anymoreslave_o_spike on February 20th, 2010 07:36 am (UTC)
Yep, me and dem walls. You know, we go waaaaaayyy back. :P

Yes, I do talk to my walls. It's not so much what they say, it's the fact that they have such an attitude! It's like having another teenager in the house...

Thank you!!!
flequillitosflequillitos on February 18th, 2010 03:23 am (UTC)
Jesus Christ! this was great! my Justin had Jack Nicholson's expresion

your stuff is different,I like it!
Maria: Justin smilingslave_o_spike on February 20th, 2010 07:37 am (UTC)
Yeah, I can see Jack's evil smile of Sunshine's face. LOL!

Thank you!!!
sevigny7sevigny7 on February 20th, 2010 01:05 am (UTC)
I just read all the comments, and by golly, no pitchforks. So you dodged the bullet, the pitchforks and the samurai sword this time! But I think we're all ready for some funny - at least I am.
Maria: BJ cuddleslave_o_spike on February 20th, 2010 07:40 am (UTC)
Yeah, I know. The funny should be coming soon. I've just been so busy at home and work.

Thank you again for the beta job. Whatever snippet you want (from whatever verse, you got it).

And hoorah! for no bullets, pitchforks or samurai swords!

And strangely enough, no hate mail either. Oh hold on a tic. Someone's at the door and it sounds like an awful lot of them and what's with all the banginnnnnnnnnnnnn

anno53 on February 21st, 2010 03:19 am (UTC)
Ooo freaky! I loved the fact that the reader knew what was going on with Justin, but Brian did not. It really ramped up the tension. Great writing!
Maria: Justin smilingslave_o_spike on March 18th, 2010 02:31 am (UTC)
Exactly! We knew what was going on in his head and if Brian had known, he would have gotten him help a lot sooner. But well...you saw how it ended...

Thank you and sorry this was so late. Btw, I LOVE the icon of Randy! :)