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01 July 2006 @ 11:43 pm

QaF Fic - Something Seriously Amiss

Title: Something Seriously Amiss
Part 1 of 3 Parts
Pairing: Brian/Justin (technically speaking BrianJustin/JustinBrian)
Rating: PGish in this part
Timeline: Early S5
Summary: This is your typical body swap plot line. A witch decides to show the boys what it would be like to walk in the others shoes. Chaos and hilarity ensue.

Disclaimers: I don't own Cowlip, the boys, a functioning utility room, my Expedition (used it to bail out my cook), a life, etc, etc, etc...

This is Part 1. There are 3 Parts. I will be posting Part 2 in the next 2 days and then 3 shortly thereafter.

In case you were wondering.

This is cross-posted at

qaf_bunnies, where

_alicesprings requested a body swap plot line. She wanted something funny, not angsty - I'll try, but I'm not really funny.

This is for her....

Part 1

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entr0ki on July 2nd, 2006 10:17 pm (UTC)

Professor McGonagall would be appalled to see you imply that she is a day over 100.

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slave_o_spike on July 2nd, 2006 10:25 pm (UTC) (Expand)

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slave_o_spike on July 2nd, 2006 10:46 pm (UTC) (Expand)

penguin88 on July 2nd, 2006 09:20 pm (UTC)

I can't wait to see where you are going with this :). You have a great feel for Justin and Brian and that makes it interesting and fun to read. They have a wonderful dynamic in the series, and it is great to see that same dynamic recreated in fanfiction. They are both rather snarky with each other and can be rather cruel to one another at times - and you show this well in their dialog. This story is realistic (well, their relationship anyways...) and nicely descriptive. Thank you for writing :).

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slave_o_spike on July 2nd, 2006 10:28 pm (UTC)

*blushes* Thank you! That was lovely fb.

I love the Brian/Justin dynamic and I don't think there's enough snarkiness in fanfiction between the two (

epicallytired and

plumsuede do it quite well. It's their way of communicating to each other.

In my current series (I'm at Chapter 9), it's an AU and they just meet in the 4th chapter so they haven't gained that snarkiness level yet with each other. That's one thing I miss writing in that series.

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penguin88 on July 2nd, 2006 10:45 pm (UTC) (Expand)

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slave_o_spike on July 2nd, 2006 10:52 pm (UTC) (Expand)

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entr0ki on July 2nd, 2006 10:16 pm (UTC)

IIIIII LOOOOOVEE YOUUUUU! More fics please :)

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slave_o_spike on July 2nd, 2006 10:29 pm (UTC)

IIIIII LOOOOOVEE YOUUUUU!

Whoa! Did a bomb go off?! *looks around maniacally*

Well, I love ya too. More is coming.

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entr0ki on July 2nd, 2006 10:32 pm (UTC) (Expand)

kitkatbyte on July 2nd, 2006 10:47 pm (UTC)

Haahaa! I am loving this! I'm looking forward to the next part!

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slave_o_spike on July 2nd, 2006 10:54 pm (UTC)

Thanks. The next part should be in the next few days.

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crazy4qaf on July 2nd, 2006 11:41 pm (UTC)

Yep, looks pretty interesting to me. :p I especially like the way you turn Justin against Brian. *lol* Hmmm, I guess somebody else is bound to top tonight, huh...XD

*anxiously waiting for updates*

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slave_o_spike on July 3rd, 2006 02:33 pm (UTC)

Well you know, Brian Kinney always tops!

More to follow soon.

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slave_o_spike on July 3rd, 2006 02:34 pm (UTC)

There is so much to work with. I'm just having to find which stuff I want to work with the most because there's so much.

Thanks!

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faramir_boromir on July 3rd, 2006 03:18 pm (UTC)

So ready to read the next installment of this one! Great concept!

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slave_o_spike on July 3rd, 2006 04:57 pm (UTC)

Thank you! Only the concept has been used quite a few times, I'm trying to give it a new spin. We were having a discussion on my journal about what I should call the boys in the next installment if you wanted to add your 2 cents worth.

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slave_o_spike on July 6th, 2006 01:19 am (UTC)

I thought it would be a fun plot to use for our boys.

Thanks

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slave_o_spike on July 6th, 2006 01:55 am (UTC)

Well I'm very glad this is the sort of thing you have been waiting for! I actually can't believe I'm writing this as I like to usually write about original concepts but I guess it's all in how you carry it out.

Thanks for the fb and that it's all you hoped it would be.

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straberrikyss on July 11th, 2006 05:30 am (UTC)

hi i found this chapter through the part 2a. i need to go read that now but had to tell that i cant wait to read more. lots of fun.

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slave_o_spike on July 11th, 2006 05:37 am (UTC)

Yay! Hope you like part 2a!

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spazyspag on July 15th, 2006 09:59 pm (UTC)

Minerva is so NOT a Mary Sue. I don't even like bingo.

Hehehehe. You're awesome.

And you write very realistic dialogue! Going to read more now...

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slave_o_spike on July 15th, 2006 10:28 pm (UTC)

Half of what makes the Brian and Justin pairing so great is their witty repartee.

The other half, *ahem* goes without saying.

And thank you for the wonderful fb!

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agneson9 on July 16th, 2006 05:54 am (UTC)

Been saving this for a cloudy day.

Keep envisioning Professor McGonagall (HP) wondering around Liberty. LOL

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slave_o_spike on July 16th, 2006 01:44 pm (UTC)

Imagine a 'Minerva' type witch only who looks like Jessica Fletcher (AKA Angela Lansbury) and of course dressed in modern day closthes.

I seriously was not thinking about McGonagall when I was typing the first chapter - I just thought the name was witchy enough.

Hope you enjoy the rest! Thanks for the fb.

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