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09 July 2006 @ 07:05 pm
QaF Fic Update - Something Seriously Amiss Part 2a  
Sorry for the ridiculous delay. The restaurant has been keeping me super busy along with my kids (and then there was the 4th of July which is a big deal around here). I've demanded at least 1 hour a day to do some serious writing (not an hour where everyone and their brother is bothering me). Maybe I'll rant about my employees in another post and show some pics from Tuesday's party, but I just want to post the next part so here it is:



Title: Something Seriously Amiss
Part 2a of 3
Pairing: Brian/Justin (technically speaking BrianJustin/JustinBrian)
Rating: R?
Timeline: Early S5
Summary: This is your typical body swap plot line. A witch decides to show the boys what it would be like to walk in the other's shoes. Chaos and hilarity ensue.

Disclaimers: I don't own Cowlip, the boys, employees with functioning brains (okay, okay - some of them do)

This is for _alicesprings who requested a body swap story at qaf_bunnies

There will be 3 parts. Part 2 was just too damn long so I split it into 2.




Part 1


NOTE: For the purpose of this chapter, I will refer to the boys only by their name because they are alone and with each other in this chapter. So Brian is Brian in Justin's body and Justin is Justin in Brian's body because, well because that's who they really are.

So, okay, as long as we're on the same page....




Part 2a


Brian and Justin come home from BabylonCollapse )
 
 
Current Mood: bouncybouncy
 
 
 
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Maria: BJ copulatingslave_o_spike on July 10th, 2006 03:02 pm (UTC)
Hell, I would love to have that kid's ass! Only thing is I would have to reaccustom myself to his body as my center of gravity would shift too.

Thanks and I'm glad you liked this latest installment.
darla123 on July 10th, 2006 01:44 pm (UTC)
Loved it loved it loved it - hot and funny at the same time , can't wait for the next part :)
Maria: BJ Sex Take 2slave_o_spike on July 10th, 2006 02:59 pm (UTC)
hot and funny at the same time

Ah, I have acheived balance! Thanks!
faith_27faith_27 on July 10th, 2006 02:29 pm (UTC)
Just discovered your story and wanted to let you know that you cheered up my day :-) Great idea and even greater sex scene due to the switched bodies. Very interesting - and funny! Looking forward for the next part.
Maria: B/J ILUslave_o_spike on July 10th, 2006 02:58 pm (UTC)
I noticed you commented on the other site but I'll respond here. Glad I cheered up your day!

Sex is each other's bodies? So much potential to work with. Thanks!
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Maria: BJ Guh Showerslave_o_spike on July 10th, 2006 11:21 pm (UTC)
Why thank you! I love knowing that I hit all the right spots when people read my fics.
kaiponoheakaiponohea on July 10th, 2006 09:55 pm (UTC)
Oh, Spike, this is just hilarious. I don't remember the last time I laughed so hard out loud--good thing I'm home by myself today!

"Hey! Hey! No nail-biting! Those are my nails you're biting!"

For some reason I totally lost it with this line. It's SO Brian! Ant there were so many more--like someone above said, if I tried to quote favorite lines I'd end up quoting the whole thing.

Great job. Thanks! and more, please!
Maria: BJ copulatingslave_o_spike on July 10th, 2006 11:22 pm (UTC)
More to come soon. And Brian's such a drama queen when it comes to his image and clothes - how could I pass that up?!

Thanks for the great fb!
Bow ties are cool.: Randymi_nion on July 11th, 2006 02:09 am (UTC)
heh! this is kinda cute.
Maria: BJ copulatingslave_o_spike on July 11th, 2006 06:07 am (UTC)
I try. Thanks for the heads up!
Wendy: giddy justinkitkatbyte on July 11th, 2006 02:58 am (UTC)
This made me laugh out loud several times!! I think my favorite line was... "I look hot when I cum," Justin said smacking his lips. ... that just killed me. All of the dialogue was hilarious! I love how you had them deal with things. And the cookie thing! HAHAA!
Maria: BJ Sex Take 2slave_o_spike on July 11th, 2006 06:08 am (UTC)
I had to throw the Oreos in there! Can you imagine Brian watching as someone put those things into his body?! Oh the drama queen possibilities were endless!

Thanks for the fb!
claramarie12claramarie12 on July 11th, 2006 03:10 am (UTC)
This is genius. You write very funny so don't sell yourself short-- this is too much-- I love it!
Maria: B/J ILUslave_o_spike on July 11th, 2006 06:06 am (UTC)
I think I have the funny down - I was just worried about the sex. But it appears I handled that one too.

Thanks for the great fb!
Thistle: love bite by paddiesthistle90 on July 11th, 2006 04:30 am (UTC)
OMG, freaking hilarious! Also, wow, I thought the sex would be too weird, but it was hot and really romantic.
Maria: BJ Guh Showerslave_o_spike on July 11th, 2006 06:05 am (UTC)
Hilarious, hot and romantic? Cool. Thanks. Yeah, I tried not to make the sex too weird. I needed to keep them in character the whole time by asking how would they react in this situation and what would they think was important and THEN knowing what they might think was important to them.

I'm so confused....
Zoe: perfectostraberrikyss on July 11th, 2006 05:43 am (UTC)
"Woo Hoo! I have a nine inch dick!"
i truly laughed outloud at that line. and "Now if someone tells you to 'go fuck yourself,' you can say 'been there, done that.' there too. this was hysterical. i cant believe it took us this long for someone to write a body swap story. and im very glad that you were the one to do it.
Maria: B/J ILUslave_o_spike on July 11th, 2006 06:03 am (UTC)
Actually, pparently there have been a few but I think they tried to take themselves too seriously.

I'm glad I could make you laugh - I try to provide enough lines so everyone has many to choose from. Thanks!
Wendy: loves hugkitkatbyte on July 12th, 2006 01:21 am (UTC)
Hee! I had to come back and re-read this. Today at work when I was bored I couldn't stop thinking about Justin's center of gravity. Looking forward to the next part, whenever that might be!!!
Maria: Justin Fun Fun Funslave_o_spike on July 12th, 2006 03:00 am (UTC)
Wow, you re-read it?! I know there are some people who re-read my shit a second time to catch everything (I'm also posting a crack!fic that I'm up to chap 9 on). I like the fact that you were thinking of Justin's bum - tis a thing of beauty.

I'm working on part 2b as we speak. Also, I friended you since you keep taking time to comment. Thanks!
(no subject) - kitkatbyte on July 12th, 2006 04:20 am (UTC) (Expand)
entr0ki on July 12th, 2006 03:59 am (UTC)
Hi, I read this last night while offline and couldn't comment. This was incredibleawesome! At one point I was trying to fight back giggles, stood up, paced around once, stopped and doubled over laughing. Good job.
Maria: Spike I've always been badslave_o_spike on July 12th, 2006 05:04 am (UTC)
I love having that effect over people! So very cool.

Office and diner fun coming! Thanks.
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Maria: money shotslave_o_spike on July 12th, 2006 09:39 pm (UTC)
Thanks Brie. I was really hesitant about writing the porn. And it wasn't just about the porn but also showing how the other felt in the other's body at the same time PLUS having to keep it light.

Whew!

And I can't really imagine anyone wanting to give themselves a rim job. Thanks!
meclarayoda on July 12th, 2006 08:44 pm (UTC)
waiting for the next part..................
All I can say is WOW. That was simply too funny. Good job! Where have you been hiding? I really enjoy the lighter side of B/J with some seriousness added.
Maria: BJ Guh Showerslave_o_spike on July 12th, 2006 09:41 pm (UTC)
Re: waiting for the next part..................
I only believe in the lighter side of BJ. I've been hiding here, in my LJ! I've got other stuff in my memories and am currently in the middle of a crack!fic (all of course BJ - who else?).

Thanks!
meclarayoda on July 12th, 2006 08:48 pm (UTC)
friend?
I Would like to be added to your Friend list...my DOB is in my profile. I don't want to miss anymore good stuff...
Maria: B/J cha cha chaslave_o_spike on July 12th, 2006 09:42 pm (UTC)
Re: friend?
My journal is not f-locked. I can add you as my friend (actually I already did) but if you want to see updates of my stuff, you need to add me in return.

Thanks again