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09 July 2006 @ 07:05 pm
QaF Fic Update - Something Seriously Amiss Part 2a  
Sorry for the ridiculous delay. The restaurant has been keeping me super busy along with my kids (and then there was the 4th of July which is a big deal around here). I've demanded at least 1 hour a day to do some serious writing (not an hour where everyone and their brother is bothering me). Maybe I'll rant about my employees in another post and show some pics from Tuesday's party, but I just want to post the next part so here it is:



Title: Something Seriously Amiss
Part 2a of 3
Pairing: Brian/Justin (technically speaking BrianJustin/JustinBrian)
Rating: R?
Timeline: Early S5
Summary: This is your typical body swap plot line. A witch decides to show the boys what it would be like to walk in the other's shoes. Chaos and hilarity ensue.

Disclaimers: I don't own Cowlip, the boys, employees with functioning brains (okay, okay - some of them do)

This is for _alicesprings who requested a body swap story at qaf_bunnies

There will be 3 parts. Part 2 was just too damn long so I split it into 2.




Part 1


NOTE: For the purpose of this chapter, I will refer to the boys only by their name because they are alone and with each other in this chapter. So Brian is Brian in Justin's body and Justin is Justin in Brian's body because, well because that's who they really are.

So, okay, as long as we're on the same page....




Part 2a


Brian and Justin come home from BabylonCollapse )
 
 
Current Mood: bouncybouncy
 
 
 
herbie_weasley on July 13th, 2006 08:03 pm (UTC)
This is seriously genius. Please post more ASAP.
Maria: Justin Fun Fun Funslave_o_spike on July 14th, 2006 02:01 am (UTC)
Genius again? You are terrific for my ego!

More soon. Part 2b is really going to be looong...

Thanks for the fb!
penguin88penguin88 on July 14th, 2006 02:33 am (UTC)
I am loving this fic :). I will eventually get back into your crack!fic, I promise, but in the mean time...

I love the humor in this fic - the whole scenario is very funny, but I like the way that you show the humor in the tiny aspects of the scenario as well. The way that they talk about their assets definitely had me laughing. The sex was also well done. Don't worry about that - nothing seriously amiss. The Brain/Justin naming thing was a little confusing at first, but eventually my poor tired brain caught on and it was clear sailing from there.

TBC in Part 2b where the boys spend a wacky day at Kinnetic and the diner. Well, I am very much looking forward to this :). Thank you for writing.
Maria: Simpson LOLslave_o_spike on July 14th, 2006 03:04 pm (UTC)
Hey, no hurry on the crack!fic. It's quite the complicated little story.

Much like this one only after this next part, there will be only one more. The next part will be quite long - I hope lj will let me post it all.

And yes, I had to keep a tight balance on making the sex work, be hot and funny at the same time so I'm rather pleased at how it came out.

Thank you for the lovely fb as always.
Lisabrianswalk on July 19th, 2006 11:09 pm (UTC)
"Brian turned back around and mumbled something about "it never felt like making concessions."
OMG, you made me de-lurk with one line.
OK, the manicure, the cookies, reaching up high, "Woo hoo! I have a nine inch dick.", the rim job. They may have had something to do with it. But I'm still mad at you. "Maybeef" made me choke on my salad!

Lisa
Maria: Chicken Little dancingslave_o_spike on July 20th, 2006 02:49 am (UTC)
It's always fun to watch and see what line will be people's favorite. And I don't think Brian ever really minded all that much bending his knees and so on.

Sorry about the salad.

Thanks :D
Hating you makes me all warm inside.: bunny bounceshappier_bunny on July 20th, 2006 01:27 am (UTC)
OMG...you've raised the level of excellent crack!fics with this chapter.

Oreo wars..and Brian stuffing them down Justin's throat...almost made me pee my pants.

The descriptions of them checking themselves (as each other) out was hilarious...still giggling.

and omg, you wrote sex...and it was hot and so adorable...

poor Brian can't cuddle his woobie...lmao.

LOVED IT.
Hating you makes me all warm inside.: b/j 502 animated sexhappier_bunny on July 20th, 2006 01:30 am (UTC)
oh cannot believe I forgot to mention brian and his new bootay..and justin and his new nine inch cock...bwhahhahahah
(no subject) - slave_o_spike on July 20th, 2006 02:53 am (UTC) (Expand)
sevigny7sevigny7 on April 27th, 2007 02:13 am (UTC)
Since I discovered you through your QAF Challenges fic, I've been rummaging around in your (metaphorical) attic, and found this series. The whole Oreos section got me giggling, and it was just genius from then on. You are amazingly talented...
Maria: BJ copulatingslave_o_spike on April 28th, 2007 03:45 am (UTC)
*giggles*

Thank you! You know, I almost didn't write this. I thought the body swap idea was too cliche and too Disney but someone put it out as a plot bunny so I picked it up and voila!

It was a lot of fun to write.

Glad you liked!
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Maria: BJ copulatingslave_o_spike on May 24th, 2007 12:44 am (UTC)
I agree! I like bringing the little moments to life. I'm not so hot with the porn. :)
rosy5000: Brian Smilerosy5000 on September 13th, 2007 02:58 pm (UTC)
Finally getting the chance to read your other stories. I'm totally in love with this one. lol Especially after Brian chasing Justin around for the Oreos. lol This is just too funny!
Maria: Justin slave_o_spike on September 14th, 2007 03:48 am (UTC)
I mean, if you're Brian and you hate calories and fat, you would seriously get this violent. LOL!

Thanks!
brians_desiresbrians_desires on March 30th, 2010 03:34 am (UTC)
Thank you so much for writing this.
I laughed my ass off!

Can't wait to read the rest
Maria: B/J cha cha chaslave_o_spike on June 4th, 2010 02:48 pm (UTC)
Wow! I'm sorry, I thought this was after the latest chapter of Justin's Baby! Sorry...

I take it you read the rest of the story and found it just as delightful! Thank you!!! (And sorry for the mixed message and the delay on this).