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15 July 2006 @ 03:15 am
QaF Fic Update - Something Seriously Amiss Part 2b  
Here's the next part of my body swap fic. This is a long one!


Title: Something Seriously Amiss
Part 2b of 3
Pairing: Brian/Justin (technically speaking BrianJustin/JustinBrian)
Rating: R?
Timeline: Early S5
Summary: This is your typical body swap plot line. A witch decides to show the boys what it would be like to walk in the other's shoes. Chaos and hilarity ensue.

Disclaimers: I don't own Cowlip, the boys, a burial plot (you'll see...)

This is for _alicesprings who requested a body swap story at qaf_bunnies

There will be 3 parts. Part 2 was just too damn long so I split it into 2. This one is the second of Part 2.




Part 1

Part 2a


NOTE: For the purpose of this chapter, I will still refer to the boys only by their name because they are NOW either alone with each other, or apart and not with each other (it will get more confusing when they are in the same room with each other and are around other people). So I will still refer to Brian as the one who is Brian in Justin's body and I will still refer to Justin as the one who is Justin in Brian's body. So Brian (Brian in Justin's body) will be working at the diner and Justin (Justin in Brian's body) will working at Kinnetik. When it's another person's point of view, they will refer to the person that they SEE.

I don't know if you got that.

If so, explain it to me...




Part 2b

Wherein the boys wake up to spend a restful day at workCollapse )
 
 
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herbie_weasley on July 15th, 2006 08:04 pm (UTC)
Hah! This was so funny, I laughed the entire time I was reading it. Thank you so much for writing it!
Maria: Simpson LOLslave_o_spike on July 15th, 2006 10:22 pm (UTC)
The entire time? God woman, did you breathe at all? LOL! Thanks for the shout out.
Zoe: not my bodystraberrikyss on July 15th, 2006 08:08 pm (UTC)
O god that was hysterical. Harold and Harrison. Hahahah. And Ben Dover. And the milkshake and pie and ... Wow that was funny. I sort of freaked for a second in the beginning because it sounded like Brian had AIDS but then i realized that it was referring to the cancer. But damn. And those mortuary slogans. Just wow.
Maria: Justin Fun Fun Funslave_o_spike on July 15th, 2006 10:24 pm (UTC)
I think I came up with about 10 mortuary slogans but somewhere along the way I forgot half of them. That's what its like in my head most of the time.

I'll think of something funny to put into one of my stories and then *poof* it's gone 5 minutes later.

I just love the Ben Dover personally. Thank you so much for the fb.

PS Love the icon.
rip the system: QAF BJ 314? Cornerspazyspag on July 15th, 2006 11:04 pm (UTC)
Oh my god. TED is amazing. My abs are sore from the gym and I was seriously in pain from laughing so hard at him.


And Ben Dover. Hehehehehe. Reminds me of the best movie ever, Dazed and Confused.

A+++
Maria: BJ Guh Showerslave_o_spike on July 16th, 2006 12:32 am (UTC)
So that's where that came from? LOL! This happened to me at my restaurant. Someone said that was the oldest joke in the book but I could have sworn I had never heard of it before.

Ted? Is priceless. I just love him. He was so underused on the show.

Thanks for the shout out.
kelsofishy6060_842 on July 15th, 2006 11:28 pm (UTC)
YOU.ARE.EVIL.GENIUS.
I love it! Gah, I can't even tell you my favorite parts, there are too many! XD
Maria: B/J ILUslave_o_spike on July 16th, 2006 12:30 am (UTC)
Me? An evil genius?

Well, alright then...

Thanks - I love hearing that a person can't pick their favorite part because there were too many. :D:D
bodleianbodleian on July 15th, 2006 11:43 pm (UTC)
I spent the time reading this chapter laughing - I am enjoying this so much. Great job!
Maria: B/J cha cha chaslave_o_spike on July 16th, 2006 12:26 am (UTC)
Thank you! I'm glad you're finding this so much fun to read.
Love Goes On: hopecrazy4qaf on July 16th, 2006 02:29 am (UTC)
OMFG. *can`t stop laughing* Shit, woman. I swear this gets better with each new part and that says a lot. :D I really love your sense of humour and I don`t think you have to worry. We followed the BrianJustin and JustinBrian escapades just fine. ;) I`ll be anxiously waiting for the next part, cuz this story is my crack at the moment. Most, most excellent and although the entire thing is hilarious, I swear I almost fell off the chair when I read this :


"Um," Justin cleared his throat again, "Well...I...we...could...maybe...you...I ....in fact..."

Cynthia jumped in. "Wow! Imagine that, you're actually witnessing Brian's genius at work."

"But he's babbling...," Harrison said.

"To you it sounds like babbling. There are so many thoughts going through his head right now, he can't even put them into words."

Both men seemed to be impressed.
And I rest my case. XD

Maria: BJ copulatingslave_o_spike on July 16th, 2006 04:01 am (UTC)
I was thinking, 'what would I do in that situation?' I would probably stammer and babble, no doubt.

I loved using Cynthia in this one too.

Thank you for the wonderful fb and stay tuned for the last part, part 3!
Gio: B/J - 314 - possession withdrawalpaddies on July 16th, 2006 01:38 pm (UTC)
*CRACKS UP*

This is great, totally hilarious. :D:D:D

Can't wait for the next one! ;-)
Maria: B/J ILUslave_o_spike on July 16th, 2006 09:16 pm (UTC)
Next one is coming very soon.

Thanks!!
sherebissherebis on July 17th, 2006 02:40 am (UTC)
this is funny stuff... I am enjoying it.
Maria: B/J ILUslave_o_spike on July 17th, 2006 02:12 pm (UTC)
Thank you! Ending coming soon.
Still want him in your pack?: cracks up by paddies_alicesprings on July 17th, 2006 02:53 am (UTC)
Aw, this is just the most fun thing I've ever read!

I loved Ted, I loved Brian at the diner, brilliant. His meltdown, his giant lunch, talking in the third person. Thining of punishments, mmm.

Harold and Harrison *ded*, and the ending! Bwahaha!

Thank you so much, you've done perfect justice to my bunny. It's everything I'd hoped for. Hilarious. Brilliant! Can't wait for the finale!
Maria: BJ copulatingslave_o_spike on July 17th, 2006 02:15 pm (UTC)
I'm glad I did justice to your bunny.

I had to throw Ted in at some point. He's just my favorite person to write I think.

I hope your headache is gone now. *pets head* It just makes everything so fucked up.

Thanks again! Part 3 coming!
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Maria: BJ Sex Take 2slave_o_spike on July 17th, 2006 02:17 pm (UTC)
Thank you. I was wondering if in the midst of all the funny stuff, people would get that paragraph.

Glad you're enjoying.
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Maria: Justin gets caughtslave_o_spike on July 17th, 2006 03:17 pm (UTC)
Are you reading this at work? Naughty!

Brilliant? Cool! Thanks Brie!
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Maria: B/J cha cha chaslave_o_spike on July 20th, 2006 02:58 am (UTC)
I was a little worried about constantly calling them by their name but I was worried that people might get lost along the way - you know, who was talking at the time and who was in who's body, etc.

I don't normallly tend to be so dialogue heavy.

Glad you're enjoying it though anyway. Thanks.

Lisabrianswalk on July 19th, 2006 11:53 pm (UTC)
OK, let's put Brian and Justin aside for this feedback. They're perfect. You're a genius.
Cynthia, you can never have enough Cynthia interaction, of course she knows! I just feel sorry for poor Ted. Justin's "favorite" customer-I know him! The funeral guys (and yes they *do* sell used coffins).
My favorite part...

"Brian at this point was quite oblivious to anyone in his surrounding area and he started babbling. "I swear when we get our bodies back, that kid is getting....well, first he's getting fucked through the mattress, maybe the table too, but then, then he wants to get spanked? Oh, I'll give him one he'll never forget. Then, I'm gonna take Justin's cargoes and his Oreos - those Oreos - and put everything on top of the refrigerator. Cause he can't reach the top, did you know that? Everything I want to hide from him, that's where I'm putting it! God, this is just not right. Justin is quitting this place immediately! The orders and the queens and that guy with the toast, and the touching and pinching and the phone! The phone! And then that Dover guy..."
Michael, Ben and Debbie watched on in horror.
"Oh my poor baby," Debbie said while wiping the tears from her eyes.
"It's like a total twink meltdown," Michael said, as he watched with his mouth hanging open.

I would offer to have your babies, but I'm not going through that crap again for any one. May I friend you instead?

Lisa
Maria: BJ Guh Showerslave_o_spike on July 20th, 2006 03:00 am (UTC)
You can friend me. If you do, I'll friend you back. I already have five kids of my own and I wouldn't want anyone to go through that again either. LOL!

*pets Ted, sits and talks about the boys with Cynthia*

And they do sell used coffins?! *shudders*

Thanks.

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Hating you makes me all warm inside.: b/j season 5 cracks uphappier_bunny on July 20th, 2006 02:21 am (UTC)
It was not very altruistic of Brian, but that would be what he would wish for. The rest of the world could go get their own wishes.

Omg, you're gonna make me cry...pets Brian.

dfj;ajdsf;lj...OCD customer a la Jack Nicholson...excellent.

Harold & Harrison and diapers and f;laijd;fljafdl;a

"Hey! Hey! Inappropriate touching! The menu's right here and as you can see, Justin's not on it. Oh wait, you can't read, right? Maybe I can get you a menu with big, pretty pictures on it." All four men looked at each other and then at Brian.

SNORT.

Elephantman TED = ROFLMAO ~~~~oh holy hell a paper bag over his head..you're killing me with teh funny.

prank phone calls...molestated Brian/Justin....you are a goddess.





Maria: Simpson LOLslave_o_spike on July 20th, 2006 03:05 am (UTC)
*pets Brian with you - keeps petting Brian*

I love the OCD customer - someone said they knew him. I think there's one out there for everyone. (Of course, owning a restaurant, I see them all the time).

And Ted? God! The things I do to him! I'm surprised I don't get hate mail from Scott Lowell.

Goddess now? This is all going to my crack-dealing, quickly -swelling head. LOL!
penguin88penguin88 on July 23rd, 2006 05:57 am (UTC)
The love that I have for this fic just grows every time that you post another chapter. I know that I am behind, and that I still need to read your crack!fic, but I am working my way (as we speak) through my huge list of awesome stories to review. So I apologise for the wait.

In this chapter, I loved the swap of work places. The results were rather silly and definitely had me laughing in my chair. I love how annoyed Brian got when Justin's customers became to grabby for his tastes. The scene between Ted and Justin-as-Brian was also wonderful. Poor Ted *evil grin*.

Thank you for writing! Again, I'm sorry that I'm such a slow reviewer!
Maria: Happy Tree Friends ketchup in earsslave_o_spike on July 23rd, 2006 06:21 am (UTC)
Don't apologize! I know what you mean though about back-log. I have all these stories I really want to get into and read but I have to choose between either reading fic or writing it so right now I'm in writing mode.

My crack!fic will always be there.

There is one more part to this - part 3 and that's it on this one.

Thanks for the fb! I loved how Brian was annoyed at all the grabbiness too.

But Brian's not jealous - no siree! Uh-huh!