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14 May 2007 @ 07:58 pm
Original Fiction "A Day Like Any Other Day"  
Hi everyone.

So I got this plot bunny from my six year old who came running out of her room this morning and told me there were ghosts in her room.

She's been playing this game for about a week now but this morning it finally hit me.

So here's a little piece of original fiction from me.

I know it's not BJ but you might want to read it if this is your thing.


Title: A Day Like Any Other Day
Genre: Supernatural/Horror
POV: First Person

Summary: What if there really were a handful of people who could see and talk to the dead? What would their day be like?

A Day Like Any Other DayCollapse )
Current Mood: hopefulhopeful
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Maria: TCM The Road to Hellslave_o_spike on May 16th, 2007 03:11 am (UTC)
Thank you!!! :)
sevigny7sevigny7 on May 16th, 2007 12:56 am (UTC)
I can't believe I read this. I read in all genres...except Horror. First, Cannibal!fic and now you've lured me in again!

It was really compelling, Maria, and I could probably be induced, after weeks of dithering of course, to read a sequel.

Maria: TCM The Road to Hellslave_o_spike on May 16th, 2007 03:09 am (UTC)
You never read horror? Wow! I've converted you!

I am definitely thinking sequel here. Thank you so much Suzanne! *hugs you*
Sometimes it is otherwise: Dark Waterviolethamster on May 16th, 2007 02:32 am (UTC)
I enjoyed this so much. Poor little girl, but I like her attitude.
Maria: TCM The Road to Hellslave_o_spike on May 16th, 2007 03:01 am (UTC)
Thank you!!! I know - I think she's my most tragic character to date but the only way she could survive this is with a thick skinned attitude.
Doriantdorian on May 16th, 2007 08:34 am (UTC)
"The end"...? why is that ? Sounds like a beginning to me...eh eh.Aida
Maria: TCM The Road to Hellslave_o_spike on May 16th, 2007 11:10 pm (UTC)
I might turn this into a series called The Demanding Dead. LOL! Thanks!
firehead30: Bellefirehead30 on May 17th, 2007 01:11 am (UTC)
So, Maria, is this chapter one? I want to know what else, why, how, and what!

Grabbed me right away and I didn't know what to feel for the girl at first. Her age threw me, but could understand how a little girl would become so weary.

What are you going to do next?
Maria: TCM The Road to Hellslave_o_spike on May 17th, 2007 05:19 am (UTC)
Re: Maria.....more
I'm thinking of expanding on it. I really like her. When I create an OC I like, I just want to run with it. Like Joe or Phil.

Grabbed you right away? Then I did my job. :)

Thank you Fire! *smooches*
adelais_liliadelais_lili on May 23rd, 2007 07:42 am (UTC)
This is really good. I love those kind of stories. And the main character is only eight years old and already cynical as hell. At least the kid knows that there is something beyond. As if she cares. Thanks for sharing this story. Hugs.
Maria: MOM hack horror writerslave_o_spike on May 24th, 2007 12:55 am (UTC)
Exactly! As if she cares. :P

I had to put myself in her place and this is what I thought she would be like.

Thank you so much. I love how many of my flist read my little original fic and loved it!
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Maria: Spuffy filmslave_o_spike on June 16th, 2007 02:15 pm (UTC)
Not only is it right up your alley, but mine as well. This is the kind of thing I usuallly write. I've just adapted to the fandom for Brian and Justin (I can't help it, those two just speak to me).

Thank you for that. I was going for 'creeepy.' I'm thinking of expanding this and putting it into book form.
elfladyjeanne: tree of lifeelfladyjeanne on January 18th, 2010 05:58 pm (UTC)
This little girl would make a killer Vegas act. Liked a lot!! Thanks for sharing.
Maria: blinking owlslave_o_spike on January 25th, 2010 04:29 am (UTC)
She would, wouldn't she? Personally, I would love to see her go on the John Edwards Show and show him how it was done. No 'I sense someone with a J in their name,' for her. It would be more like, 'You're Mark, right? Your mom, Gladys, who died while eating mashed potatoes and watching Oprah, says hi and for you to stop watching so much beastiality porn.'

Thank you for the fb. :)