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25 July 2007 @ 08:48 am
"Justin's Baby" Chapter 3 - Justin/Brian  
Sorry this chapter's so late! I was muddling through it because I kept thinking it sounded wrong and then I had my beta read it for me and she was simply fantastic! I love you Shadow!!!!

Also, if you're interested, I just found out that the Chainsaw Carving Depot in our town has its own website. So if you want to check it out, it's here. You can see why I drool at all the carved goodies as I pass the shop everyday (they put everything out on the lawn).

Oh yeah. I was tired of not having my full mood theme at my disposal so I changed it to an Orlando Bloom one (non-animated). I'm still working VERY SLOWLY on the animated QaF one.


So here it is, without further adieu:

Title: Justin's Baby
Chapter 3
Pairing: Justin/Brian
Genre: Bad!fic, crack!fic - I dunno - take your pic - I don't really give a shit.
Rating: Mature
Warnings: God, where do I even begin? Sacrilege, demon worship, mPreg, bad language, drugged sex, bad!fic, crack!fic and mentions of the high cost of housing.
Summary: Based very loosely on Rosemary's Baby. Justin gets more than he bargained for when he moves into the apartment of his dreams.
Disclaimer: Don't own Cowlip or the boys and I still don't understand teenagers...

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Thanks go to fiercediva for the icon and poster. Thank you babe! *smooches*

A big BIG THANK YOU and lots of kisses go to my wonderful beta on this chapter, shadownyc!!!!

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Chapter 3 - Justin Meets BrianCollapse )
 
 
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my2catsmy2cats on July 25th, 2007 09:02 pm (UTC)
Ha,even the devil can't resist Justin,lol.

Should we start feeling sorry for *poor Brian* now already,lol?

Please make Ian go away...like maybe send him to hell!
Maria: Justin's Babyslave_o_spike on July 26th, 2007 06:53 am (UTC)
Nope, not even the devil - as long as the devil is one Brian Kinney.

Don't worry - I have plans for Ian. *laughs evilly*

Thank you!!! Glad you're loving.
charlie_jae on July 25th, 2007 10:11 pm (UTC)
The return of the overall's!

Oh how I have missed your writing. I love this side of Brian, ut was almost as if you coulf feel the demon moving inside.

awesome!
Maria: mPreg Justin 1slave_o_spike on July 26th, 2007 06:55 am (UTC)
Yep - the overalls have returned. Had to. Just didn't seem right to not have em. :)

I had to picture writing Brian as Brian but also with a demon inside of him - and not just any demon but THE demon - so THANK YOU!!!!

*hugs and smooches you*
kristinvogue: qafbook5kristinvogue on July 26th, 2007 12:09 am (UTC)
Hee, how I love devil!Brian and oblivious!Justin.

This was great and I completely agree with the other people who noted that it would be easy to feel bad for Justin except that Brian hasn't released just how feisty and irresistible he is :D

Also Justin's overalls of Lust totally beat out Brian's personally tailored Armani suits any day...

Maria: Justin's Babyslave_o_spike on July 26th, 2007 06:57 am (UTC)
Yep - Justin is a bit oblivious here.

But he's still the same Justin we know and love from canon so don't feel too sorry for him here. In fact, he's probably a bit more independent here too. :)

Oh hell yeah! Overalls over Armani any day. Still, with Brian wearing them...

Thank you! More soon.
lady_erzulie on July 26th, 2007 02:28 am (UTC)
ha! I LOVED this chapter. Ethan? What the hell is Ethan doing in it? Hmm.. is he a pawn in the devil's game? So more please Maria. This is so good.
Maria: Justin's Babyslave_o_spike on July 26th, 2007 07:03 am (UTC)
We need Ethan in it. Someone needs to meet a horrible fate and I can't do that to the regular cast...or Joe. :)

More to come soon, I promise!

Thank you!!!
mdlawmdlaw on July 26th, 2007 03:00 am (UTC)
You made me laugh. m :D
Maria: mPreg Justin 1slave_o_spike on July 26th, 2007 07:03 am (UTC)
Then my job is done. :)

Thank you!!!!
Rhys1daftpunk on July 26th, 2007 05:14 am (UTC)
I have missed you. I intend to keep reading this, so of course, you must continue to write.

:-)
Maria: Justin's Babyslave_o_spike on July 26th, 2007 07:05 am (UTC)
I've missed you too Rhys! I thought you left the fandom! Damn glad to see you again. :)

And of course I'll continue to write it.

Just wait to see the other people that owe Brian a debt...

*laughs evilly*

Thank you!!!!
bjgirlghbjgirlgh on July 26th, 2007 04:41 pm (UTC)
well debt?i think its great and what will ethan do in this story i really like watching brian control him its refreshing and this chapter was a little short plz send next one sooner but thanx again i was smiling the whole time!
Maria: Justin's Babyslave_o_spike on July 26th, 2007 07:58 pm (UTC)
Glad I could make you smile. :) And Ethan will figure in here, but don't get too attached to him yet. :P

Thank you! The next one might be longer.
critic75critic75 on July 27th, 2007 03:08 am (UTC)
Yes!
I must have read the story very early, because I had to stop this time to read all of the comments. Did I ever tell you that I enjoy your answers to them as well as reading the story? Well, almost as much. I remember now why I didn't comment. I got sidetracked. I had to look up the word BEATIFIC. I've read it in print a million times, but never heard it used in conversation, and I wanted to know how to pronounce it. I also was going to ask what this line meant:
"one of the straps came down, exposing one side of the lithe ever so slightly"
Wanted to ask what a lithe was.
It goes without saying that I loved the story. Every line. Loved the characters, especially demon/human Brian. And, would like to compliment you again on the great dialogue.
Sorry I let this slip by. My attention spans are growing shorter by the hour, but I have my excuses ready at all times. You can get away with a lot if you fall back on the "I'm old, I'm feeble, I've been sick, don't pick on me," routine. I should be ashamed of myself, but I'm not.
p.s. and Fcuk spell-checker. It is too spelled dialogue. It will also tell me is mis-spelled fcuk.
Maria: Justin smilingslave_o_spike on July 27th, 2007 03:20 am (UTC)
LOL! I'm in the middle of doing admin on my lj (making tags for each and every entry and putting all my fic in my memories). It's very hard! And tedious! Maybe I should get one of those lj wives so they could do that for me.

Anywho, let's not tell shadow that she missed that little thing. Ssssh. It's lithe BODY. I shall fix as soon as I post this. Ooops. Thank you for that.

I know. I use the old and tired saying and I shouldn't. I always thought it was dialogue too. I like fcuk better.

Every time I think of Justin's (Randy's) smile, I think of that word - beatific. It just jumps to mind - can't help it.

Thank you. I think I could do dialogue all day, seriously. Maybe I should just be a script writer and that way I don't have to think so hard.

PS. Yes, you're right. The scavenger thing does look like work but I wanted a challenge but now I wonder if it was wise. :P

Thank you also about the answering of the comments thing. I try to give people more than thank you :). You should read the ones over at MW. Those are fun too.

Thanks again JJ!!!
altsunthinkablealtsunthinkable on July 27th, 2007 08:08 am (UTC)
Catching up on my flist after my Harry Potter spoilerphobic induced self exile from the internet.

Overalls of Lust! Growling!demonBrian! Georgio as in Armani!

"I don't believe in love, I believe...oh never mind...I've said it a million times already."

BWAH!

Please let Ian/Ethan meet a nasty end at some point. I can wait as long as it's justly satisfying in the end. *g*
Maria: Justin condomslave_o_spike on July 29th, 2007 03:12 am (UTC)
Yep - it's all here. Growling Armani wearing Brian!

And the overalls. Can't go anywhere without em!

Ethan will have his day. *smiles evilly*

I really need an 'evil smile' icon. :)

Thank you!!!!!
Darkhaven87darkhaven87 on July 28th, 2007 04:20 pm (UTC)
im dying here. can bearly wait for the next chapter to come up. sob.
love it, its brilliant.
Maria: Justin's Babyslave_o_spike on July 29th, 2007 03:10 am (UTC)
Eeesh! Dying?!?! Can't have that. As soon as this scavenger hunt thing is over, I'll be updating. Glad you love! Thank you very much!!!
Ny: Brian stress reliefnot_yet_defined on August 3rd, 2007 07:37 am (UTC)
OMFG. *watches the sex radiating off of the bad man in waves*

that introduction to each other kicked some serious ass.

i'm both scared of your brian and slightly turned on by him, poor justin...

i freakin love this fic, and want more right now kthnx.
Maria: Justin's Babyslave_o_spike on August 3rd, 2007 06:29 pm (UTC)
Yep. Ole Brian is radiating sex off him like a sex-radiating thing! He's sexy, seductive and scary alright. The 3 S's.

I'm glad you liked 'the meeting.'

The 4th chapter is with my beta right now. I needed it looked over carefully. I've been making so many mistakes lately that I really need someone to check over my stuff. As soon as she's done, I WILL POST!!!!

Thank you!!!! *hugs you*
FanSee: Magic mushroomsfansee on August 5th, 2007 04:57 am (UTC)
Chapter 3
How come none of my neighbors look like the Dev...Brian? *sighs again*

You almost have me feeling sorry for the Dev...Brian. Almost. FanSee
Maria: mPreg Justin 2slave_o_spike on August 5th, 2007 06:11 pm (UTC)
Re: Chapter 3
My neighbors don't either. :( *cries*

My neighbor is a 70 year old man with something like 15 grandchildren.

Yeah, I feel sorry for Brian cuz he doesn't know what's about to him him. :)

adelais_liliadelais_lili on August 8th, 2007 09:37 am (UTC)
The Brian/Justin interaction is great. They so want each other, it's scary.
...to sink his teeth into, marking and claiming Justin as his own
Awesome line. I just can't wait for the time that Brian will lose control.
Hugs.
Maria: Justin's Babyslave_o_spike on August 10th, 2007 01:15 am (UTC)
The time for Brian to lose control will come. I promise. *laughs evilly*

And when he does...oh yeah...:)

Thank you!!!! I love your fb! *hugs you back*
Coll: embracecolleen2328 on September 3rd, 2008 05:19 pm (UTC)
Sinfully good
The plot thickens. Cue Paganini Jr.
Maria: mPreg Justin 2slave_o_spike on September 4th, 2008 02:14 pm (UTC)
Re: Sinfully good
Yeah, cue him in and get rid of him. :P

You know, my daughter was 15 when I started writing this (she was the one who beta'd the first chapter) and so she decided to watch Rosemary's Baby.

She said this was nothing like my story. LOL!

Thank you!
shenovashenova on May 31st, 2009 05:55 pm (UTC)
Now that was a funny meeting between the guys but so entertaining. Poor Justin first time he meets Brian and he ruins his suit, which is very expensive. How will he pay his debt back I wonder??? So Ethan lives in the building too iinteresting. I am loving this story on to the next chapter.
Maria: Brian Predatoryslave_o_spike on June 8th, 2009 05:57 pm (UTC)
Brian has several ideas on how Justin can pay him back. *insert evil smile here*

Thank you!