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24 January 2008 @ 07:11 am
"Death Does Not Become Him" - Chapter 4 Orlibean  
And without further adieu:

Title: Death Does Not Become Him
Pairing: Orlibean
Rating: R
Warnings: supernatural. minor character death, talk of death, language, VERY DARK HUMOR
Summary: What if there were people who could see how, what of and when a person will die? What if one of those people was Orlando? And how does Sean fit into all this?
Disclaimer: None of this is true.
Except for maybe Viggo...


Author's Note: I would like to extend a huge Thank You to my beta, simplyshanni. No matter how many times I read a chapter over and over and over again, I always miss so much. So thank you once again. *hugs you tightly*



Chapter 4 - wherein Viggo dialogues with OrlandoCollapse )
 
 
Current Mood: confusedconfused
 
 
 
Vikgolden_helikaon on January 25th, 2008 02:44 am (UTC)
“No, because you haven’t shut up about this sprout guy since you told me about the date,” Viggo smirked.

*giggles* Sean Sprout. Nice one.

Great chapter!
Maria: Orlando Bloom PoTC heroic Willslave_o_spike on January 26th, 2008 07:49 pm (UTC)
Hey! I friended you back! :)

Yeah, I couldn't resist doing a beansprout joke. LOL!

Thank you!
elfinobsession: strengthelfinobsession on January 25th, 2008 03:21 am (UTC)
I think my brain checked out when Orly put on the brown shirt! DAMN!




Save the Sprout! Save the World!
Maria: Orlando contemplatingslave_o_spike on January 26th, 2008 07:52 pm (UTC)
Ah...the shirt! The evil shirt!

You know, I was able to write this scene so detailed-like because I could imagine it so clearly in my mind and it sent shivers down MY own spine. LOL!

Thank you!

And we so need a bumper sticker! SAVE THE SPROUT!!!
critic75critic75 on January 25th, 2008 08:14 am (UTC)
I'm looking forward to Orli's meeting with Sean, and what a lovely, witty character Viggo turned out to be. I hope more of the QAF listers are reading this as well.
Loved the title in the post. "Death does NOTE Become him." Hmm, I was looking for a different story.
Mariaslave_o_spike on January 26th, 2008 08:40 pm (UTC)
LOL! JJ! THANK YOU!!!

I changed it! Actually, DEATH DOES NOTE BECOME HIM is a story that my paralell universe self is writing and we accidentally switched!

Anywho, I love that you're reading this despite no Brian. I'm not sure if any of the other qaf listers (except Steph and Aida and SW) are reading but you could always pimp it out for me with them.

Viggo is too much fun to write as well as the other guys and yeah...the date should be a hoot and a half.

Thanks for reading JJ! *hugs*
Doriantdorian on January 25th, 2008 08:49 am (UTC)
Viggo never says shit.Viggo knows how to pick sexy shirts.Viggo is God.I'm totally obsessed with Viggo.Who would name his son Viggo though.... Can u imagine moaning Viggooooooooooo....Viggggggggg !!!Hum....Aida
Maria: Orlando Cute!slave_o_spike on January 26th, 2008 08:42 pm (UTC)
So...let me guess...

You like Viggo?

LOL! There should be plenty of Viggoness in this story for you Aida!

Thank you hon!!!!
kittylass: seankittylass on January 25th, 2008 10:35 am (UTC)
Oh happy, happy: another update!! ♥

I love how you write all these people, everytime you introduce a new one (like Viggo), it's exciting to read who he is!

The reality about how it must be to have Orlando's 'gift' is getting to me more and more, you're really giving it so much depth.

I hope he can find out what's going to happen to Sean! I really want them to be together for a long time (duh!) :)

Thank you!
Maria: Orlando Bloom PoTC heroic Willslave_o_spike on January 27th, 2008 05:08 pm (UTC)
LOL! Glad you look so forward to this! :)

I love these characters so I like to pay them reverence. I'm glad I'm doing the job I hoped to be doing.

I will delve further into Orlando's gift but I need to do it in little chunks at a time.

Thank you for the great fb!!! :)
foxraferfoxrafer on January 25th, 2008 05:03 pm (UTC)
I really enjoy how you tell the story. You set the scene and introduce the characters in a very seamless and seemingly effortless way.
Maria: Orlando contemplatingslave_o_spike on January 27th, 2008 05:09 pm (UTC)
Thank you!

Better fb I could not ask for. Those are the two very things I always hope I achieve!

Thank you again! :)
Daphneduffy_60 on January 26th, 2008 01:00 pm (UTC)
Hey, girl!

Another wonderful update. (as usual)

I love the banter between Viggo and Orlando. You had me laughing in spots.

Stay well,
Daphne
Maria: Orlandoslave_o_spike on January 27th, 2008 05:11 pm (UTC)
Thank you Daph!

And glad I could keep you laughing! :)
Barbaravienna80er on January 28th, 2008 04:29 pm (UTC)
Viggo the Guru! God how I love him. He's cracking me up. First the brown shirt, then the wrong vegetable and then the comment on the girls tits. FANTASTIC.
Poor Dom. Being afraid of water.
I have a hard time waiting for more and the actual date with Sean.
Maria: Orlandoslave_o_spike on January 30th, 2008 01:27 am (UTC)
I love Guru!Viggo too! LOL!

*pets Dom*

The next chapter is the date and is a bit longer than most of my chapters. It's also with my beta now and should be posted tomorrow.

Thank you!!!! :)