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18 March 2008 @ 05:11 am
"Death Does Not Become Him" Chapter 9 Orlibean  
Title: Death Does Not Become Him
Chapter 9
Pairing: Orlibean
Rating: R
Warnings: supernatural. minor character death, talk of death, language, VERY DARK HUMOR
Summary: What if there were people who could see how, what of and when a person will die? What if one of those people was Orlando? And how does Sean fit into all this?

Disclaimer: None of this is true. I don’t own the guys. And I mean no disrespect to any morticians out there.


Author's Note: Many, many, many thanks to my wonderful and talented beta simplyshanni *hugs you*



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Doriantdorian on March 19th, 2008 12:44 pm (UTC)
I'm sorry i don't have time for a proper comment on this chapter.Just wanted to let you know it totally cracked me up !! I love the dog, i love Eric,Orli is the cutest thing on earth !! Great chapter.Aida
Maria: Eric Banaslave_o_spike on March 20th, 2008 01:26 am (UTC)
Woot Woot! I got you to say Orli is the cutest thing on earth!

Woot Woot!!!!!

Love you Aida! Thank you!!!! :)

Barbaravienna80er on March 19th, 2008 06:26 pm (UTC)
YAY, update! I know I already told you but I really love your humor. Your chapters always make me grin and giggle! You cracked me up, especially with the playing dead!
Maria: Sean Bean slave_o_spike on March 20th, 2008 01:29 am (UTC)
Thank you! I'm glad I can always put a happy face on you when I write! :)

Yeah, the playing dead stint was a bit over the top, but fun to write. I can actually see it happening in my head. :)
Lotripper: orlando closemsilverstar on March 22nd, 2008 06:26 am (UTC)
I really like this story, all the little details like Billy wanting to tell the story and Elijah's lost dream of working on Hollywood plastics. And Eric getting along so well with Orlando's friends, in general. Plus the underlying theme of Orlando's Big Secret. Lovely job with this.

ETA: I wanted to link to this whole series, but some chapters are missing tags :-(

Edited at 2008-03-22 06:27 am (UTC)
Maria: Sean Bean slave_o_spike on April 5th, 2008 06:25 am (UTC)
First off, I'm sorry that this took so long in getting back - I've been uber busy. *winces*

Thank you for the lovely fb. I'm glad about the details. I always like to put those little things in - they make the characters seem more human and REAL. The story can't just be about Orli's gift but about the stupid things he does once in a while with Dommie and Billy and what kind of life Elijah leads, etc. Thank you again for that.

I fixed the tags on this story - I think. I also put the links to the previous chapters right before the new chapter up above.

I'm missing the tags on chapter 10, which I just posted now! So it's up. If you need help in linking, let me know. (I'm pretty sure I fixed the tags...*ponders at my senile self*)
My Flame Burns Bright: Emoticon - Thankful Kisssuch_a_steph on April 18th, 2008 05:01 pm (UTC)
Yes I'm still reading, and I'm still enjoying it thoroughly :D I just get lost for time sometimes.

Before I read on, I'm going to take a guess at the who-dunnit factor & say it wasn't the butler, but the BBQ'ed best friend.

Loved Dom's tale of triumph! You weave in so much detail and background into your characters, and I love every little tidbit. Thanks. (I'll get to chapt 10 after agood nights sleep *hugs*)
Mariaslave_o_spike on April 21st, 2008 11:30 pm (UTC)
I know about getting lost for time too! LOL!

It's not the butler, and no, it's not Eric Bana. But I probably shouldn't have said that. Keep you guessing and all that!

I like to show little bits and pieces of life while relating a tale. It makes it more real. I would love to make a movie where all these side stories occur. I'm glad that it comes across so well and makes for a more enjoyable read.

Thank you Steph! *hugs you back*